Love's Gonna Make It Alright

an excellent looking artwork + 2 of my good friends + made by a wonderful user + a critique box = holy-carios I think my Critiquing is going to go through the roof!

any-who.

good things I spotted on this artwork:

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="211" title="Bullet; Blue"/> firstly, the posing for this artwork is just so romantically brilliant and that I must say this was a very well chosen pose because I don't think any other that I can think of at the moment could work as well as this one.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="211" title="Bullet; Blue"/> Secondly, the bed has been drawn out very well indeed as well, with the added creases into it making it look like it's been used and slept on before. as well as the little bits of shading here and there to help it look more three dimensional.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="211" title="Bullet; Blue"/> Then there is the shading, which in my opinion not only helps the characters and furniture look more three dimensional but it also helps set the mood a bit for this artwork which I think was an excellent combination to put in.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="211" title="Bullet; Blue"/> And who can deny that with the Title "Love's Gonna Make It Alright" for this artwork helps even more with the romantic feeling of this artwork. it has been well chosen out and to me sometimes the Title can make all the difference to an artwork.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="211" title="Bullet; Blue"/> Then the Background for this artwork also helps in making this a bit more of a calmer and fun artwork as well a romantic. and I think the background also gets helped in describing from the description when Chrome writes "Paradise" because to me combined with everything else the background does make this seem like someones paradise.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="211" title="Bullet; Blue"/> on closer inspection the eyes for both Kuro and Drave have been done very well indeed with light reflecting off them and shading behind the Iris. Then the hairs on both characters head combined with the shading make them look more three dimensional as well and some hairs facing a bit in a different direction like this was a photo taken. Then lastly the blushing for both characters in my opinion have been applied at the perfect tone for it to be view-able on top of each characters head colors.

Bad points I spotted on this artwork:

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="564" title="Bullet; Black"/> well I don't really find anything wrong with this artwork but if I just nit pick for a bit the only thing I found odd was that Kuro's main black color for like the arms, neck and head doesn't seem dark enough in my opinion. but that's it.

my over all conclusion:

from what I've seen and said I think you will know that I think this is a very lovely and thoughtful artwork for these two users who in my opinion have been internet bullied by other users due to jealousy, and I know it's not my place to say my opinion but I just wanted to get that out. but getting back to the artwork, this is also one those rare artworks I've seen so far that uses feeling as much as detail put into the artwork. with adding feeling into something it can make all the different to an artwork or video. and finally I'm sure after seeing this, Kuro-no-yuki and ChrisCLX and everyone else that you know Chrome are very proud of you for sticking up for these twos love and always giving them hope when either them are down in the dumps.

thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the rest of your day! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="390" title=" (Smile)"/>